Vision- The choice of colors in your design suggest playful delight and the layout is pleasing to the eye. You may have used just little less varient in color and got the same effect though. The design is very ultra detailed and one's imagination can wander to alot of different things by viewing your work. Originality- I like it and it's alot of things suggested(I.E.-carnivals,circuses,happy kid dreams) I don't think displayed together like this before. Technique- Personaly I would give you five but I can see where real hard core critics would feel that the structure of your work was too Overlapped with details, thus muddling themes. Impact- I felt this work was overall a dynamo. it took imagination and drew it out of my head in many pleasant ways as I'm sure it will to many others who will veiw it.